Angel of Death

What a very sad ending! I did like Owen until his true colors broke free, but you did a great job taking the masks off of your characters and she ...

My, my dear, this was excellently executed. I love Regency novels and such, so I am able to spot easily if anything doesn't seem right, language wise, and this was ...

Jiggy, you have rendered me speechless...which happens every once in a while. My, this was a great poem and I am anticipating the next one. I've never read poetry from ...

Hey Ky, sorry if it took me a while to get with this. Mirroring what Jiggy said, this was indeed, a damn good chapter. And it was my favorite so ...

Hello, I'm Angel of Death but you can call me Angel! Welcome to YWS!!! Okay, this was a good start. Its not original, I can tell you that, but you ...

Hey Adrian!!! This was great, as always. And for your first love poem, I felt it was executed well and it was just amazingly beautiful. I didn't see any flaws ...

Hey Ash!! I'm so glad this is finally posted! And you certainly didn't disappoint. I have no nitpicks and I think that you just made this story more believable and ...

This was another good chapter but I think everything is going a little bit too fast. Since your last chapter didn't sit too well with me, I think this one ...

Here I am again!! I found a few nit-picks: Mom was acting strangely. Dad was home early from work. Both of them spoke to each other in low tones, glancing ...

Hey KJ!!! How've you been? I'm so glad you've posted another chapter because, though this was good, I really don't think I would be happy to have been left with ...

Hey Ash! I liked this and the prologue (preface) gets better every time but there's just a few things that I spotted. My body was erect, tensed for when he ...

I liked this very much. Some may say that you should show instead of tell but this is the Epilogue, and that's another thing, I think this should be the ...

Hey Fang! This was another good chapter and it was written well, I just was kinda confused by all of the figurative language you used. Let me see if I ...

Hey KJ! This just keeps getting better and better. And, I know I say this a lot, but I love Vick Dawson! He's so real and different from the male ...

Hey Ash, thanks for the heads up!! First off, I already love this because of the song you have in the beginning. Panic at the Disco is one of my ...